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    In a romance novel...whenever he and she looked at each other....

    "Their eyes tangled"

    Me: *snort* *groan*
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    That sounds like the sort of thing that Snoopy might write.
    ~ Russell ("MelMak")

    "[Sing] and [make] melody in your heart to the Lord." -- Ephesians 5:19b

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    • #3
      Maybe she meant "Their eyes Tangoed"

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      • #4
        Originally posted by The Melody Maker View Post
        That sounds like the sort of thing that Snoopy might write.
        It has been awhile since I have read Snoopy's writings

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        • #5
          I like the Romance of Homer and Jethro better....

          I cocked my eye at her
          she cocked her eye at me
          and we just stood there
          cockeyed as could be.
          "Neighbor, how long has it been since you’ve had a big, thick, steaming bowl of Wolf Brand Chili?”

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          • #6
            He was tall, like a Christmas tree that was six feet eight inches high.
            "I am not angered that the Moral Majority boys campaign against abortion. I am angry when the same men who say, "Save OUR children" bellow "Build more and bigger bombers." That's right! Blast the children in other nations into eternity, or limbless misery as they lay crippled from "OUR" bombers! This does not jell." - Leonard Ravenhill

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            • #7
              Originally posted by KingsGambit View Post
              He was tall, like a Christmas tree that was six feet eight inches high.
              That, believe it or not, is very nearly word for word what I came across in a different novel that I promptly unborrowed (Kindle Unlimited).

              But...tangling eyes sounds so....violent.
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              • #8
                Originally posted by DesertBerean View Post
                In a romance novel...whenever he and she looked at each other....

                "Their eyes tangled"

                Me: *snort* *groan*
                You proved bad writing with just the words "In a romance novel"


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                • #9
                  Originally posted by Sparko View Post
                  You proved bad writing with just the words "In a romance novel"

                  Bad EVEN for a romance novel...
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                  • #10
                    ~ Russell ("MelMak")

                    "[Sing] and [make] melody in your heart to the Lord." -- Ephesians 5:19b

                    Fight_spam!

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                    • #11
                      Snoopy book 3.jpg


                      Securely anchored to the Rock amid every storm of trial, testing or tribulation.

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                      • #12
                        Snoopy book.jpg


                        Securely anchored to the Rock amid every storm of trial, testing or tribulation.

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                        • #13
                          Snoopy book 2.jpg


                          Securely anchored to the Rock amid every storm of trial, testing or tribulation.

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                          • #14
                            Hopefully we will get more Peanuts cartoons from Charles Schultz in the resurrection.

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                            • #15
                              Originally posted by The Melody Maker View Post
                              Okay, I'm on pins and needles -- perhaps even tenterhooks -- as I await breathlessly for happens next

                              I'm always still in trouble again

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